Under the Safehold IV section (page 3), it says
you can only equip one Underling unless you have a Safehold II (or better)
but everywhere else in the file states the second Underling is only allowed with a Safehold I.
Underling Cleric seems to be in a weird spot. Either Undead Touch is nasty in the module and it's basically a slot lock (or pay the token/action tax via potions), or it's a (mostly) dead token. Perhaps it should be changed to +Heals?
"But won't that stack with +Focus from the Underling Wizard?" you may ask. Well, yes, but given that there's concern over +Focus and +Ranged stacking already, I also support changing Underling Wizard to +Spell and Underling Rogue to +Missile to prevent the +Focus/+Ranged double-dipping and my proposed +Focus/+Heals double-dipping, as well as +Focus/+Melee double-dipping from Polymorph builds (which surprisingly does not seem to have been brought up in this thread yet).
Under the Safehold III section (page 4), the statement
Like Hirelings mentioned under Safehold IV
should probably be updated to say Safehold V.
Also, echoing concerns that Follower Fiend is overpowered (since wrists have slot expanders that give
multiple slots) and Follower Dragonkin is underpowered, especially since (as per FAQ thread, but nowhere in the document) it does not stack with the bonus Figurine from high CHA.
Under the Trainer Limits (Hirelings, Underlings and Followers) section (page 5), the paragraph that starts with "Since some collectors might want to create a
Safehold I" should probably be de-indented, as it currently looks like it's part of the Safehold III rules. The first sentence is also an incomplete clause; that period should probably be a dash instead.
Cleric main / Druid secondary