+2 Dual Shot Sling
Not sure parenthetical is necessary, but it could go either way. The word Ammo usually isn't capitalized.
Gameplay note- there is no useable ammo for this sling in 2023.
May turn in up to 2 ammo tokens each rd
+2 Sun Scimitar
The 'o' in 'FOB' should be lower case.
(FoB weapon)
Boots of Puhweehwa
'With' feels like it should be an ampersand. Boots of the Marauder used two ampersands and looks cleaner.
The 'with' in front of Incorporeal is usually 'vs'.
Drop Oxford comma.
+2 to AC & immunity to Surprise, Maze, Petrification & 50% miss chance vs Incorporeal
Cloak of Retribution
Wording is cleaner than Belt of Thorns, so I think it should stick. But the two are worded slightly differently for the same effect.
Figurine of Power: Phoenix
2013 version uses 'cures' instead of 'heals'. 2013 also has erroneous 'free action' text, so it's fine to go with new wording. Just pointing out the cures/heals thing.
Gloves of Focus
There is a rare from 2020 named Gloves of Focus.
With how Shirt of the Shrewd and Arcanum Shirt are shaping up, it would be better to just use the mechanic name.
Hand Wraps of Focus
+2 to Focus
Greaves of Absorption
Tokens usually omit the Oxford comma
-2 damage from Acid, Cold, Fire, Darkrift, Poison & Shock
Robe of Skill
'1/game' should be in parentheses to match other tokens
(1/game)
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