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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #1

There are 5 Uncommon Zealot items. Having three of these five items equipped gain you "Immune to Surprise"

Thanks for all your suggestions!

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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #2

Looks good to me. Love the uncommon token set. GREAT set bonus!
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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #3

My only critique to add to this would be the "Charm of Dwarven Charm" could use a name that only has charm in it one time.

Other than that, I think these look good.
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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #4

Daniel White wrote: My only critique to add to this would be the "Charm of Dwarven Charm" could use a name that only has charm in it one time.

Other than that, I think these look good.


It's a joke about "charm" of a drunkard belching.
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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #5

Dwarven Sling of Smarts is currently listed as 1 handed. It's probably the best UC damage wheel for a 1 handed ranged weapon ever.
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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #6

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Maybe it's just a minor thing, but I find the line break in:
"Sling
Stone of Blasting"

makes the it a little unclear as the what this item is - especially for newer players.

Could it be type-set as :
Sling Stone
of Blasting

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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #7

Pants of the traveler:

You may want to change this to: no effect for more than 3 in party.

This way it’s more clear how they work with charm of awareness.

Edit
The goblin shield is lower AC than the typical uncommon shield, and is only brought up to “par” by using a common goblin weapon. Given it requires being paired with a common weapon, I propose it be 2ac, 3ac with goblin weapon.

Also, I LOVE the zealot set!
Last edit: by Endgame.
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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #8

Arcanist Kolixela wrote:

Daniel White wrote: My only critique to add to this would be the "Charm of Dwarven Charm" could use a name that only has charm in it one time.

Other than that, I think these look good.


It's a joke about "charm" of a drunkard belching.


The joke is even better as "Dwarven Charm", but <shrug>.
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2021 Uncommon Feedback 3 years 8 months ago #9

Guedoji wrote:

Arcanist Kolixela wrote:

Daniel White wrote: My only critique to add to this would be the "Charm of Dwarven Charm" could use a name that only has charm in it one time.

Other than that, I think these look good.


It's a joke about "charm" of a drunkard belching.


The joke is even better as "Dwarven Charm", but <shrug>.


I agree - I prefer the Simplicity of just “Dwarven Charm”.
I would also prefer the Dwarven Hurling Insult to be Dwarven Hurled Insult - as I think it seems a better play on the expression.

I was wondering about Pants of the Traveller - does it stack with Charm of Awareness? Or would 5 Charms of awareness cancel its effect. Would high level groups have 3 members using ghosts to get a +13 initiative bonus as a matter of course?

And lastly - based on the pictures I think the Treasure Bag looks bigger and should be the 150 gp while the Pouch should be 100 gp. But that’s a minor quibble.
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