It looks great, thanks! A few minor points for the next revision...<br /><br />1. The Cloak of Elvenkind says that if the wearer is the last remaining party member in the room the monster will discover the wearer and attack normally. But - what if there are more than one party members wearing Cloaks of Elvenkind? They won't be the "last remaining party member" so the monster won't discover them (a rules lawyer could argue). Possibly rephrase so that it says if all remaining party members are hidden by Cloaks of Elvenkind the monster will discover them and attack normally.<br /><br />2. Dragonscale Helmet was left off of most of the various charts in the book, including the one on page 5 and the character armor choices on page 5. <br /><br />3. Note 2 on page 7 says that the Horn of Plenty must be worn on the entire adventure. The note should say the same thing for the Ring of Regeneration and the Amulet of Wonder as well, according to their descriptions later in the guide. <br /><br />4. On page 7 it says that non-consumable items are kept by the player and used throughout the dungeon except in the rare & extreme cases where they are destroyed in the dungeon. Shouldn't it say that if it is destroyed in the dungeon, they can't be used for the rest of the adventure but that the player still retains them? I'm sure it was said in the forums that permanent items will never be taken from players, and that if they are "destroyed" that just means they can't be used for the rest of that adventure. <br /><br />5. On page 9, should it say that the 2005 UR's were printed with both the .Com and the regular 2005b token back? The way it is worded it sounds like they were exclusively printed with .Com backs. And, if the UR's in 2005 were intentionally printed with both the 2005b back and the .Com back, neither should show up in the misprints section, right? Instead of misprints, they are just two intentional versions of the print run. It would be very interesting to know the percentages printed of each, since the .Com seems to be the much more common version. <br /><br />6. Page 21, how many weighted nets can be used on non-human-sized monsters? <br /><br />7. Page 27, the Dragonscale Helmet should have the note regarding the complete Dragonscale set having -10 vs flame damage. <br /><br />8. Just a clarification - the Bracelets of the Zephyr allow 2 spells or scrolls in that one round, right? I seem to recall it was just spells and not scrolls, but since the Bard can use it, it seems that scrolls are applicable too. <br /><br />Thanks!<br />Mike<br />