TOPIC: Please proofread Mini QTR 2024

We're about to send the Mini QTR to the printer. But before we do, we'd like to get some extra eyes on it to check for typos, wonky formatting*, and accuracy. If a recipe in the Mini QTR contradicts the 2024 Recipes file, the latter is the correct one.

*The cover art is intentionally narrower/shorter than the page. This is a full-bleed print and the extra is going to get trimmed.

I realize there are some strong feelings regarding the recipes, but I'm afraid that ship has sailed. This is not the thread to debate them.

Thank you kindly.

The wording on the "if the wearer is X class" is different between Charm of Gifted Vigor and e.g. Bead of the Bull/Cat. I think it would be good to be consistent between them. (Especially because "bonus" has a mechanical meaning when it comes to attribute scores!)

Similar comment on "see td.com/safehold for hireling details" on Hireling Oracle/Scribe vs. other Hireling tokens as well as Underling Cleric/Druid/Steward vs. other Underling tokens

"Focus" in the description of Ioun Stone Opal Prism has the appearance of a hyperlink, but does not in e.g. Ioun Stone Amethyst Prism. It should probably have no special formatting in the QTR.

Shirt of Barbed Insults says "the total RD gained from this ring is +3." Should say shirt instead of ring

Trinket of Trollform interchangeably uses "owner" and "druid" in the first paragraph. It's a little awkward - might be easier to read if it just used one or the other consistently.

Several transmute recipes have different indentation on the first bulleted ingredient: Bead of Horus, Bracers of the Inferno, Chalice of Chugging, Spirit Pet Asp (also on the second ingredient)

The recipe for Ring of Psychic Mastery says "mr2x Phil. Stone" - the "mr" shouldn't be there

"##### GP in Bars": "Bars" is capitalized in all recipes except Safehold III/IV

I think I hit all your suggestions Andrew Stern, thank you!
Here's the latest version.

Andrew Stern wrote: The wording on the "if the wearer is X class" is different between Charm of Gifted Vigor and e.g. Bead of the Bull/Cat. I think it would be good to be consistent between them. (Especially because "bonus" has a mechanical meaning when it comes to attribute scores!)

Similar comment on "see td.com/safehold for hireling details" on Hireling Oracle/Scribe vs. other Hireling tokens as well as Underling Cleric/Druid/Steward vs. other Underling tokens

"Focus" in the description of Ioun Stone Opal Prism has the appearance of a hyperlink, but does not in e.g. Ioun Stone Amethyst Prism. It should probably have no special formatting in the QTR.

Shirt of Barbed Insults says "the total RD gained from this ring is +3." Should say shirt instead of ring

Trinket of Trollform interchangeably uses "owner" and "druid" in the first paragraph. It's a little awkward - might be easier to read if it just used one or the other consistently.

Several transmute recipes have different indentation on the first bulleted ingredient: Bead of Horus, Bracers of the Inferno, Chalice of Chugging, Spirit Pet Asp (also on the second ingredient)

The recipe for Ring of Psychic Mastery says "mr2x Phil. Stone" - the "mr" shouldn't be there

"##### GP in Bars": "Bars" is capitalized in all recipes except Safehold III/IV

Thank you Andrew! Your help is much appreciated.

For 2024 there is no way to craft or purchase a 10 point healing potion. Is it possible to add a recipe for them?