TOPIC: 2022 QTR Lightning Proof

Please check out the latest public beta of the 2022 QTR . If you are so moved, please fine-tooth-comb it for errors, omissions, or whatnot.

Please do not comment on page breaks at this time. Those will be dealt with after the text settles.

Unfortunately, this must be a very short proofing period. If you wish to participate in this process, I do not recommend putting it off.

Thank You

Page 28 still lists the year 2019.

Arnold wrote: Page 28 still lists the year 2019.

2019 is the copyright year for that image, not the booklet as a whole.

Please post any comments about recipes in this thread .

+1 Blunderbuss: "magical ranged blunt weapon; If the attack" should either change semi-colon to period or change "If" to "if"
Bead of Binding: should "heals +3 damage" be "heals +3 HP" to be consistent with other "heal" effect text?
Bead of Greater Binding: Should "heals +3 damage" be "heals +3 HP" to be consistent with other "heal" effect text?
Bead of Guided Strike: This says "score critical hits" but Amulet of Aiming uses the shorthand "crit". Which is preferred?
Blunder Horn, Blunder Pipe, Blunderbuss: Do these need the expanded "misfire" text from +1 Blunderbuss? Alternatively, should +1 Blunderbuss use the more succinct misfire text from Blunder Pipe/Horn?
Cap of Dodging: "Ranges" s/b "Ranged"
Cloak of the Scoundrel: "+1 to Hit" s/b "To Hit"
Death Knight Mail: Should this link to the Death Knight Set?
Earcuff of the Ravager: "+3 to Hit" s/b "To Hit"
Figurine of Power: "reflex" s/b "Reflex"
Gambler’s Grenade: "if the thrower hits and got a natural 15 on the attack" need to make sure tense matches between "hits" and "got"
Greater Ring of Havoc: "must be chosen before beginning the adventure" the "Heroic/Champion's Choice" tokens use the text "must be chosen before the adventure begins"; which is preferred?
Lenses of Guarding: "an intercepted attack via Guard" should this be "an attack intercepted via Guard"?
Muk’s Greater Ring of Havoc: "must be chosen before beginning the adventure" the "Heroic/Champion's Choice" tokens use the text "must be chosen before the adventure begins"; which is preferred?
Quiver of the Elements: "this quiver is a permanent items" s/b "item"
Ravager Shield: "2 to AC" is missing a "+"
Ring of Havoc: Same comment as other "Havoc" rings

✅Bead of Binding: should "heals +3 damage" be "heals +3 HP" to be consistent with other "heal" effect text?
✅Bead of Greater Binding: Should "heals +3 damage" be "heals +3 HP" to be consistent with other "heal" effect text?
✅Blunder Horn, Blunder Pipe, Blunderbuss: Do these need the expanded "misfire" text from +1 Blunderbuss?
✅Cap of Dodging: "Ranges" s/b "Ranged"
✅Cloak of the Scoundrel: "+1 to Hit" s/b "To Hit"
✅Death Knight Mail: Should this link to the Death Knight Set?
✅Earcuff of the Ravager: "+3 to Hit" s/b "To Hit"
✅Figurine of Power: "reflex" s/b "Reflex"
✅Gambler’s Grenade: "if the thrower hits and got a natural 15 on the attack" need to make sure tense matches between "hits" and "got"
✅Greater Ring of Havoc: "must be chosen before beginning the adventure" the "Heroic/Champion's Choice" tokens use the text "must be chosen before the adventure begins"; which is preferred?
✅Lenses of Guarding: "an intercepted attack via Guard" should this be "an attack intercepted via Guard"?
✅Muk’s Greater Ring of Havoc: "must be chosen before beginning the adventure" the "Heroic/Champion's Choice" tokens use the text "must be chosen before the adventure begins"; which is preferred?
✅Quiver of the Elements: "this quiver is a permanent items" s/b "item"
✅Ravager Shield: "2 to AC" is missing a "+"
✅Ring of Havoc: Same comment as other "Havoc" rings

Marc D wrote: Bead of Guided Strike: This says "score critical hits" but Amulet of Aiming uses the shorthand "crit". Which is preferred?

both are acceptable

Thank you!

Possible clarification - Ghost Accelerator is turned in if the incorporeal is captured forever.

edwin wrote: Possible clarification - Ghost Accelerator is turned in if the incorporeal is captured forever.

I hope not. No one would use them lol

edwin wrote: Ghost Accelerator is turned in if the incorporeal is captured forever.

It's not turned in, but you can only use it once per game.

Earcuff of the Ravager in the QTR is still different to the Earcuff of the Ravager in your recent post about the final images sent to the printer -
truedungeon.com/forum?view=topic&defaultmenu=141&catid=55&id=253359&start=24#410999
I assume the QTR is the correct one so doesn't need changing?

Iross wrote: Earcuff of the Ravager in the QTR is still different to the Earcuff of the Ravager in your recent post about the final images sent to the printer -
truedungeon.com/forum?view=topic&defaultmenu=141&catid=55&id=253359&start=24#410999
I assume the QTR is the correct one so doesn't need changing?

There was final final FINAL update:
truedungeon.com/forum?view=topic&defaultmenu=141&catid=658&id=252907&start=36#403503

It matches that image.